Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Two hearts thud slightly off beat. Two chests pressed close, bare.
Fingertips in all their subtlety, Brush ever so gently across
A blushing cheek. Eyes close, Tongues dance behind thirsty lips,
And trembling lungs draw quickly at heated air.
Bodies plead in Silent longing. Tongue-brushed lips
Caress one another. Limbs intertwine, seductive
Words exchanged with each Lingering touch.
Their breaths between them interchange form one chest
To the other. Wandering hands evoke tiny sounds
That slip under breath between timid lips.
Bodies tremble, unaware and afraid,
Driven by impulse, feeding from the urge.
Two hearts thud slightly off beat and two chests press close,
Bare.
Thoughts and wishes of what might have been.
Add a Comment:
 
:iconunhinged-arrogance:
Unhinged-Arrogance Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student General Artist
I really like this one. Seems you took a bit of a page from me in some regards. :D I love yours better. It just flows so smoothly compared to mine.
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I wrote this in biology class haha. I had just been wanting to write something like this for a while, and you wrote yours so i was inspired to just do it:)
Reply
:iconunhinged-arrogance:
Unhinged-Arrogance Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student General Artist
You're truly awesome, I can't even write a poem of this caliber without turning everything off and focusing on it.
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, thank you:))
Reply
:iconunhinged-arrogance:
Unhinged-Arrogance Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome Sami, you inspire me alot with your writings. :D
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD thank you again, so much
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:)
Reply
:iconnacreousclouds:
nacreousclouds Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Time Lords have two hearts. So do Klingons :D
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
do they have two chests too?
btw... you gave back my birthday gift :(
Reply
:iconnacreousclouds:
nacreousclouds Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
I dunno what I would do with it, so I'm spending it on you :D
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, fine
Reply
:iconnacreousclouds:
nacreousclouds Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
But if you would rather see it as "he hates my present" rather than "he's giving me free stuff because he is clearly the greatest guy in the world and I'll probably never meet anyone like him," you could always give me a different present :D
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha il take it you are awesome.
Reply
:iconnacreousclouds:
nacreousclouds Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
If that's what you got out of it, I'm not going to complain :D
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha:)
Reply
:iconrspeirs:
RSpeirs Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
everyone seems to be writing one of these today
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
what do you mean?
Reply
:iconrspeirs:
RSpeirs Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
oh, like in my watch list there's been like 3-4 people to have post poems about making love in a meaningful manner today
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ah.. well, this may or may not be about 'making love' its pretty much up to interpretation
Reply
:iconrspeirs:
RSpeirs Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
yeah, one of the others was as well
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well, cool then.
Reply
:iconrspeirs:
RSpeirs Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
indeed
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well, have they been any good?
Reply
(1 Reply)
:icontheinkheart:
TheInkheart Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a very good poem! :hug: I like it :D
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
Reply
:icontheinkheart:
TheInkheart Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome :D
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD oh, and thank you for the watch:)
Reply
:icontheinkheart:
TheInkheart Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, your welcome! XD Right back at you :highfive:
Reply
:iconinkstainedpens:
InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×

:iconinkstainedpens: More from InkStainedPens


Featured in Collections

Poetry by Chandevi

Poems by Missunderstood28


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
September 24, 2012
File Size
836 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
194
Favourites
9 (who?)
Comments
33
×